HMD

[gamemakers]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Anon is enabled, don't be an a jerk.

This is not a love meme, however, that also doesn't mean it is a hate meme. Someone's driving can be good, feel free to say as much! Just try to give them an idea on how.

Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but please be sure if you comment to reply to at least 3 other people. We'll be keeping an eye on this post to make sure everyone's commenting around.

There are some helpful crit questions posted here if you are feeling lost on how to word yourself.

Comments

MODS

[gamemakers]

Mods, and mod NPCs.

Effie | Lottie

[mannersmatter]

I only have these two right now.

Britt - Sherlock and Maximus

[gluteus]

hit me!

Barbara Gordon, Ruby Lucas, Primrose Everdeen

[andproper]

I've been absent lately - just got back from Israel - but back now. c:

Venus, Howard, Eva, Penny, Punchy

[iselldrugstothecommunity]

Hit me with your best shot. I'm still getting the hang of balancing this many characters so I already know that's an issue, but as for the rest just let me know. :)

Clint // Atticus // Eddie // Nikola // Hatter

[from_a_distance]

Okay, I've got:

Clint Barton from_a_distance

Atticus Bell kind_of_a_nerd

Eddie Blake no_spelled_y_e_s

Nikola Tesla ps_you_look_hot

Hatter friend_i_hope

Hats - Some and Darius

[gruesome]

Boom, baby.

Lina- Doc Holiday

[doc_holi]

I will tag out later tonight! And anon is cool with me. Bring everything on. :)

Eponine and Calico

[gardienne]

Slipped away for a month whilst I finished off my Uni essays, but back now whilst I polish off my dissertation.

Eponine - gardienne

Calico - riptheseams

LENZ -- JAY // OC

[amourtician]

first off, i know i've been kind of flaky with tags. i'm working on it -- i'm very ill right now and i've had a string of bad day lately, in terms of pain and fatigue. that said, i'm actively pursuing treatment and my flakiness will improve in the coming months

if it doesn't, feel free to kick my arse

jay is an OC and i know it's hard to crit OCs, so here are specific questions:

1. what sort of person does he come off as? i need to know how he's reading so i can compare it to my intentions for him and know whether i'm on the right track
2. is he consistent? he's a bit of a mess, i know, but is he a mess that makes logical sense?
3. am i handling exposition and introspection well? i do worry about divulging information about jay's world and his background, since that might bog down tags and logs instead of being interesting and substantial

finally! i am ESL and i currently do not live in an anglophone country. how is my grammar? my vocabulary? do i make any consistently nonsensical word choices that cannot be explained as jay's style of speech being a tad off-kilter?

other commentary welcome. anon is fine, harsh is fine. i have a screened, anon-enabled, untracked HMD post, too, if you're not comfortable being public with crit.

bucky barnes / marvel 616

[deadthenred]

I am Alex and I just have the one account!

Kevin Prentiss, Eliot Spencer

[fire_punk]

Karis Needleteeth

[teethofneedles]

Let me know if anything needs work.

neophyte redglare

[hangingaround]

I am well aware my tagging speed leaves much to be desired and I have a whole bunch of backtags to get to sob

Joan Watson

[formersurgeon]

Hi, I'm Kit and I'm new! I know there's not much to go on yet, but I welcome any suggestions :)

Nepeta Leijon

[whoseesbynight]

hit me /o/

Katy - Pruna, Shion, Ian Gallagher

[knifewithnoname]

All these kids. Apologies for my sudden disappearance for a week and also apologies for any tags that you may have got in that week with awful spelling as my phone doesn't have spell checker.

But yes please crit me

Ni. on mobile hence the anon XD

[(Anonymous)]

Donatello/polyturtle
Jack/akingalways

Peeta Mellark | Cinderella

[shinyisfalse]

Just these two right now.

Cuthbert Allgood

[tis_allgood]

I'm fine with all sorts of everything, anon or otherwise.

Hyperion Crius

[cutshort]

ive been absent due to volunteer work and a broken laptop! hoping to get back into the swing of things soon enough 8V

betsy | thane krios

[battlesleep]

struggling somewhat with speed tagging wise since the game's sped up since i joined. let me know if that's caused you problems or anything else about my activity / characterization / tagging / etc. thane's still a fairly new character for me and i welcome feedback of all kinds c:

anon is fine, i also have an hmd up here where screening can be requested, i think that is all.

Mona, Bruce B, Asha

[doesnotsew]

I have been pretty MIA recently and that is my bad! I'm adjusting to a new job and it's leaving me trying to figure out my time; I might have to drop someone temporarily, depending on how things go. That being said, hit me!

My people are skinlotion, doesnotsew, and hasacondition.

Wyatt and Wesker

[the_marshal]

Anything at all, just let me know. :)

Amry - Neffa a Reyeth

[lessthanelementary]

CRIT ME HARD, BROS. :D Some points I'd personally like feedback on are below, but anything goes! There is also a screened, anon-abled HMD in his journal, if that's more comfortable for you.

-is Neffa's voice consistent? He actively tries to be many things to many people - but I want him to be one person with many faces, rather than coming off like different people.
-too much extraneous tl;dr worldbuilding per tag? too little??
-have I been flaking/dropping threads on you? Failing to see through things we planned? Giving you hard-to-work-with tags??

thanks!!