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[gamemakers]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Anon is enabled, don't be an a jerk.

This is not a love meme, however, that also doesn't mean it is a hate meme. Someone's driving can be good, feel free to say as much! Just try to give them an idea on how.

Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but please be sure if you comment to reply to at least 3 other people. We'll be keeping an eye on this post to make sure everyone's commenting around.

There are some helpful crit questions posted here if you are feeling lost on how to word yourself.

Comments

Ni. on mobile hence the anon XD

[(Anonymous)]

Donatello/polyturtle
Jack/akingalways

Re: Ni. on mobile hence the anon XD

[iselldrugstothecommunity]

Ni, you asked for crit, so here we go. I enjoy playing with you a lot, so here's a small thing I've noticed you do on occasion.

I feel like on occasion, you use what's said OOCly, that Don wouldn't know ICly, and work it into Don's thought processes. To dig up an old example, off the top of my head, you once had Don think "for someone who's amoral, Howard's pretty naive", when Howard and Don had just met and there was no way Don would have known that about Howard - it felt like you were pulling in an OOC comment I made, which made me think you were critting my writing in a tag. Does that make sense? It's not really infomodding because it doesn't force my character into anything, but it does tend to throw me off. I've seen it crop up a few times and I really think the only fix is to just be aware of it.

[akingalways]

Ah poop. I mean, let me just say, ICly, Don is technically supposed to be an observant smarty pants and be able to pick up on certain things about people at times. HOWEVER. I can see why you'd thought that. And why that would be a problem, even if it wasn't my intention to do that. I will definitely do my best to be more careful with that part of my writing, especially writing about things Don observes/thinks/etc, and especially especially with regards to handling OoC info.

[justoutrunyou]

I <3 how you've brought Donatello through hell a little more each round. You are one of the people I consistently stalk when I can.

[drpsychosomatic]

Hi!
Just a small note. There's nothing wrong with enthusiasm and man I wish I had as much as you sometimes! But I did notice that you've been offering Don to basically everyone who gets slated to die, sometimes even when the player has said they're going to buy their character out, or when other plans have already been made. It just comes across as quite rude so I thought I would point it out, as I'm sure you don't intend it that way. We all want our characters to have memorable, exciting plot, but please take care when you are suggesting plot for other people that you aren't overly pushy? Not everyone will openly say when they feel a line has been crossed, so you really have to be vigilant and careful.

That's really all I have for you beyond an encouragement to keep your enthusiasm :)