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[gamemakers]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Anon is enabled, don't be an a jerk.

This is not a love meme, however, that also doesn't mean it is a hate meme. Someone's driving can be good, feel free to say as much! Just try to give them an idea on how.

Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but please be sure if you comment to reply to at least 3 other people. We'll be keeping an eye on this post to make sure everyone's commenting around.

There are some helpful crit questions posted here if you are feeling lost on how to word yourself.

Comments

Lina- Doc Holiday

[doc_holi]

I will tag out later tonight! And anon is cool with me. Bring everything on. :)

[lessthanelementary]

first off: I'm really enjoying Neffa and Holiday's CR! It could potentially go a lot of different directions, and I've enjoyed how natural their conversations feel so far. I especially like how down-to-earth she is.

My only crit: When you respond to conversational tags especially, it can sometimes be hard to pull something out to respond to in a way that moves the thread forward. That doesn't necessarily mean that every tag has to end with a question or anything like that - but maybe something like adding a little more description of body language, some nonverbal cues to pick up on as well as verbal ones, might help?

I look forward to seeing where their CR goes! They're going to have to meet up in an Arena at some point, man.

[doc_holi]

First off, I'm going to agree that they totally need to run into each other in an arena at some point. That would be great.

And thanks for telling me about the tag situation. I wasn't entirely sure if this was a problem with anyone or not, but I'm glad you brought it up. I'll try better with descriptions and dialogue to move things along in the future and if I'm not doing so properly, then please feel free to bring it up to me again. I want to do this right after all. I love this game a whole lot and I certainly don't want to disappoint in any way. :) Thanks.

[the_marshal]

I really enjoy our CR between Wyatt and Doc. Somehow, despite the vast differences, they seem to have this common ground that makes their chats really light and good-feeling. That's a credit to your characterization. (I can't say as to whether or not it's canon, because I don't really know it, but I enjoy it either way.) I look forward to more.

I also want to apologize for how slowly that last thread went. That was a busy post for me, and sometimes I just got bogged down. Hopefully I didn't keep you waiting too long.

[doc_holi]

Thanks! Holiday and Wyatt do seem to have a common ground where they're trying to do the right thing in a situation where the right thing doesn't exist. And I totally recommend her canon, Generator Rex, for your viewing pleasure.

Please don't worry about slowness. I've been really slow myself these past few weeks and I've never minded getting slow tags in from anyone. It's no problem with me, but thank you anyway. ♥