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[gamemakers]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Anon is enabled, don't be an a jerk.

This is not a love meme, however, that also doesn't mean it is a hate meme. Someone's driving can be good, feel free to say as much! Just try to give them an idea on how.

Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but please be sure if you comment to reply to at least 3 other people. We'll be keeping an eye on this post to make sure everyone's commenting around.

There are some helpful crit questions posted here if you are feeling lost on how to word yourself.

Comments

[lessthanelementary]

first off: I'm really enjoying Neffa and Holiday's CR! It could potentially go a lot of different directions, and I've enjoyed how natural their conversations feel so far. I especially like how down-to-earth she is.

My only crit: When you respond to conversational tags especially, it can sometimes be hard to pull something out to respond to in a way that moves the thread forward. That doesn't necessarily mean that every tag has to end with a question or anything like that - but maybe something like adding a little more description of body language, some nonverbal cues to pick up on as well as verbal ones, might help?

I look forward to seeing where their CR goes! They're going to have to meet up in an Arena at some point, man.

[doc_holi]

First off, I'm going to agree that they totally need to run into each other in an arena at some point. That would be great.

And thanks for telling me about the tag situation. I wasn't entirely sure if this was a problem with anyone or not, but I'm glad you brought it up. I'll try better with descriptions and dialogue to move things along in the future and if I'm not doing so properly, then please feel free to bring it up to me again. I want to do this right after all. I love this game a whole lot and I certainly don't want to disappoint in any way. :) Thanks.