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[gamemakers]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

Anon is enabled, don't be an a jerk.

This is not a love meme, however, that also doesn't mean it is a hate meme. Someone's driving can be good, feel free to say as much! Just try to give them an idea on how.

Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but please be sure if you comment to reply to at least 3 other people. We'll be keeping an eye on this post to make sure everyone's commenting around.

There are some helpful crit questions posted here if you are feeling lost on how to word yourself.

Comments

betsy | thane krios

[battlesleep]

struggling somewhat with speed tagging wise since the game's sped up since i joined. let me know if that's caused you problems or anything else about my activity / characterization / tagging / etc. thane's still a fairly new character for me and i welcome feedback of all kinds c:

anon is fine, i also have an hmd up here where screening can be requested, i think that is all.

Re: betsy | thane krios

[iselldrugstothecommunity]

I really love your dialogue. It's easy to respond to and threading comes naturally, and you seem to always know the right thing to say to keep things moving fluidly. That said, I would love to see a little more body language from Thane, especially with regards to how that may or may not differ from human body language. I have a bit of a hard time picturing how he moves now.

[battlesleep]

Thank you very much! I really appreciate hearing all of that - I do sometimes struggle with Thane and body movements, especially in prose, because by nature he is a fairly still person and has a tendency to remain static, which gets boring to write for me so I neglect it. I will try to keep this more in mind and see if I can't find ways to make it clear what he's doing physically so people aren't wondering! And thank you for bringing it up. :)