first off: I'm really enjoying Neffa and Holiday's CR! It could potentially go a lot of different directions, and I've enjoyed how natural their conversations feel so far. I especially like how down-to-earth she is.

My only crit: When you respond to conversational tags especially, it can sometimes be hard to pull something out to respond to in a way that moves the thread forward. That doesn't necessarily mean that every tag has to end with a question or anything like that - but maybe something like adding a little more description of body language, some nonverbal cues to pick up on as well as verbal ones, might help?

I look forward to seeing where their CR goes! They're going to have to meet up in an Arena at some point, man.