Community-Wide How's My Driving

[gamemakers]

Welcome to the first round of our games HMD. May the odds be ever in your favor.

If you would like to participate (and we encourage it!) leave your characters journals and, if you have any specific concerns for them, feel free to ask about them.

Anon is enabled, don't be an asshat. Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but if we consistently see people asking for and not giving we'll step in.

1. Voice - does it sound like [Character's name]? Can you hear his/her voice when I play? How can I make him/her sound more accurate?
2. Characterization - Does he/she act like [Character's name]? Has he/she done anything unusual that doesn't seem [Character's name]-like? What do you feel was the more 'IC action or thought'? Why? Examples and discussion are incredibly encouraged - even in anon.
3. Motivations - Do I have his/her priorities straight? What should be important to him/her that I'm not covering?
4. Canon - Have I gotten some game facts wrong? Is [Character's name] strong enough? Am I making him/her TOO strong? Is there an interpretation or headcanon of [Character's name] you think is out of place? In what way would it be more appropriate to [Character's name]'s character.
5. Technical - How's my grammar?
6. Storytelling - Do I make things interesting for you as an RPer? Do I put enough thought into posts? How are the plots [Character's name] is involved in? How can I make them more interesting for you? How can I make your character feel important when we play? How can I help your character play out his/her plots? How can I help your character have their time in the spotlight? Am I giving you enough to respond to with each post? Have I ever made a post that just 'turned you off'? Why?
7. Player Etiquette - Am I breaking any rules? Making inappropriate comments? Am I making you feel welcome? Am I easy or hard to plot and or work with? Am I easy to approach? Am I god-moding? Are you having a positive experience overall? Am I tagging enough outside of my fandom?

Comments

[slowlydrowning]

Yes! We should totally do something. What would you like to dooooo!?

[knottherapy]

I dunno! She has been talking to people - anyone Finnick should be worried about (in his jealous eyes as her boyfriend)?

She may have noticed too that Fin arrived at Effie's party with Katniss - she might want to address him with that? Just thinking out loud ideas to at least start a thread.

[slowlydrowning]

So far everyone has been very nice and like "oh, you poor little scardey-cat thing, you." So far, anyway.

Oooh yes, she could definitely react to his arrival with Katniss. :D