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Welcome to the first round of our games HMD. May the odds be ever in your favor.

If you would like to participate (and we encourage it!) leave your characters journals and, if you have any specific concerns for them, feel free to ask about them.

Anon is enabled, don't be an asshat. Also please make sure if you are asking for crit you are also giving it. If everyone only posts for themselves, no one will get any feedback. You don't need to comment to everyone, but if we consistently see people asking for and not giving we'll step in.

1. Voice - does it sound like [Character's name]? Can you hear his/her voice when I play? How can I make him/her sound more accurate?
2. Characterization - Does he/she act like [Character's name]? Has he/she done anything unusual that doesn't seem [Character's name]-like? What do you feel was the more 'IC action or thought'? Why? Examples and discussion are incredibly encouraged - even in anon.
3. Motivations - Do I have his/her priorities straight? What should be important to him/her that I'm not covering?
4. Canon - Have I gotten some game facts wrong? Is [Character's name] strong enough? Am I making him/her TOO strong? Is there an interpretation or headcanon of [Character's name] you think is out of place? In what way would it be more appropriate to [Character's name]'s character.
5. Technical - How's my grammar?
6. Storytelling - Do I make things interesting for you as an RPer? Do I put enough thought into posts? How are the plots [Character's name] is involved in? How can I make them more interesting for you? How can I make your character feel important when we play? How can I help your character play out his/her plots? How can I help your character have their time in the spotlight? Am I giving you enough to respond to with each post? Have I ever made a post that just 'turned you off'? Why?
7. Player Etiquette - Am I breaking any rules? Making inappropriate comments? Am I making you feel welcome? Am I easy or hard to plot and or work with? Am I easy to approach? Am I god-moding? Are you having a positive experience overall? Am I tagging enough outside of my fandom?

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I have two BBs in play right now....

Also, I'm sort of the layout/code monkey mod here, so if you have any thing on that?

Annie Cresta

slowlydrowning

Commander Shepard

galaxyherder

Edited 2012-05-12 02:30 (UTC)

Oh whoa you play Commander Shepard too? /makes a note to stalk this

Your Annie is wonderful <3 She and Katniss' interaction, I feel, has been given a bit more depth than the books because we only get to see Katniss' point of view on Annie and I like that I get to see Annie's view on Katniss. I am very happy with how you've been playing her!! She's sweet and shy and closed off but at the same time she's warm and loving and I don't know how you balance the open and the closedness so well I can't imagine it is easy. You're doing a great job with her! :)

Also... code monkey huh? I'll have to pick your brain some time I'm trying to make a custom layout for one of my other characters for another game and I'm not sure how to go about it.

lol. Yup. I have my little BB Annie, and then Shepard who can kill everyone with her pinky. It's a nice balance. ;D ohohoh

oduvoaudou :3 t-thank you. That means a lot, really. I really really love playing her, so I am glad that you enjoy her. I'm excited for her and Katniss to become friends. Right now, she probably just thinks people from District 4 are big wierdos! lol

And feel free to pick my brain all you want. I kind of make shit up all the time, but I will help however I can! <3

A++++

And... Its funny I'm good at mockups in photoshop but stick me in front of coding it's like trying to read latin lol...

Boo, get out.

No ILU. I love how much you do anything mod wise. And I love your Annie, although Amanda covered why. And I'm sure you shepard is awesome.

Whore. I don't need your sass.

♥

You survive off my sass.

I've really enjoyed playing off of your Shepard. I loved the interactions between Ariadne and her, particularly in that log ~~thatwe'restillworkingonshh.~~. I look forward to plotting with you more!

And possibly playing with your Annie, because I always liked her.

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