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[capitols]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?

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This is not a love meme, however, it's definitely not a hate meme either. Harassment will not be tolerated, please report any incidents to the moderators. Feedback of all kinds is encouraged. Participation in this HMD is not mandatory, however starting in January, all players must participate twice a year. We also highly encourage everyone to comment to at least three other members with feedback.

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[gamemakers]

Michi

[pythianjudgment]

Terezi Pyrope | pythianjudgment

I also have a private HMD located here, if you'd like.

Manda

[tookthewheel]

My kids are:

Bucky Barnes | MCU | tookthewheel
Clementine | The Walking Dead | smarterthanthem

Hit me with the good and the bad if you have it. I welcome any advice on how to improve my playing and both my characters have private HMD's on their journals as well.

Danya

[seestheman]

Clara Murphy | seestheman | Private HMD
Darcy Lewis | tasermaiden

I also have a catchall private HMD here.

Krystal

[elfstone]

Carlos the scientist | WTNV | youbarium

Stephen Reagan | Panem OC | capitolprivilege

Aragorn | Lord of the Rings | elfstone

All have private HMDs on their journals!

[celebrityskinned]

Hey guys, hit me with your best shot! I'm especially interested in hearing how Marco and Black Tom are coming across since I've only recently dusted those characters off.

I have an HMD that's anon and IP-free here.

Lexil

[dead_black_eyes]

I play Linden Lockhearst (Hunger Games AU of L from Death Note) and Derek Zoolander! Ask some questions, tell no lies.

Fritz - Initiate, Hannah

[carnagecarnival]

So I'm a helper mod now. If there's any issues I specifically need to look at, feel free to bring them forward here.

In general RP, I've been making a lot of minor but frequent typos and mistakes. I'm sure if it's so frustrating for me, it likely will be for others. Consider this a notice that I am doing my very best to work on it. As for tag speed, I still have a rule that if a tag sits for over a week, I have to contact the mun in some way to say I'm not dropping.

For Initiate's character, he's reached that point where he's changed a LOT from when he first started. I apped him with intention of a redemption arc and I feel he's mostly there. Still with flaws of course, but there. However, because of this vast difference, there's naturally a residual worry of "is he recognizable as being the same character?"

As for his speech patterns, it is totally okay if he is difficult to understand! This means I am doing his speech correctly. It is meant to be disjointed, and occasionally inaccessible. His speech is meant to be peppered with slang, poetic language, and shit he just made up on the spot. Sometimes he can do double meanings. If you ever need a translation, when it's something you feel your character would know, hit me up! I won't bite.

Hannah is mute, terse, secretive, and anti-social. This can be a difficult combination for people to tag. Am I doing enough to keep things interesting and flowing with her, and is there anything I can do to improve?

She is also a new character so I am still feeling her out (not quite 100% fully formed as Initiate is). If there's anything you'd like to see, I'm all ears.

Kit

[formersurgeon]

Hey folks! Just Joan Watson here. I also have a personal HMD post here. I think my biggest issue is character development. In that she doesn't seem to have much. She's getting more used to and accepting of violence, and owns the "doctor" title, but I'm not sure if that's enough. I also sometimes forget things that have happened to her, which I'm sure is annoying to the people I play with. I'll try to be better about both of those things.

Thanks!

Nabi

[crabmunicator]

Karkat Vantas | Homestuck

There's a private HMD in his journal too if you prefer, should be near the top.

[formersurgeon]

Black Tom is an asshole.

Good job :D

xiilnek

[ka_sera_sera]

Roland Deschain | The Dark Tower

Amry

[void_whereprohibited]

I play:

Cecil Palmer (AU) | void_whereprohibited | HMD
Cyrus Reagan (OC) | currupted | HMD
Samwise Gamgee (OU) | lasttosail | HMD

Links are to their private HMDs, if you'd prefer to discuss something there! Some things in particular I'd love to hear about:

-Is Cecil's character development making sense? Does he feel consistent with who he was before everything that's happened to him recently?
-Is Cyrus' voice consistent? Do you have a good sense of him as a character? I worry that he's inconsistent between threads, and that that makes him hard to respond to, or to read how he's supposed to come off!
-Am I doing well at making threads interesting and keeping them going? Are tags pretty easy to respond to?
-Am I doing okay at OOC planning, helping you feel involved with stuff we do together in-game? Am I failing to follow through on stuff we've planned?
-How's Sam's voice??

Thalia

[a_minute_younger]

Gary Epps | OC | a_minute_younger | Journal HMD

Hi, I'm relatively new here and I'm open to any crit you can think of! It's been a while since I've played Gary at this stage from his canon, so I'm particularly interested in hearing if his voice/actions/reasoning is consistent and makes sense. If you'd rather, his journal HMD (linked above) has anon on, IP logging off, comments screened, all the typical bells and whistles.

Smurf

[honeyibrokeharlem]

Aang | actually112 | Avatar: The Last Airbender
Bruce Banner | honeyibrokeharlem | MCU
Justine Florbelle | beastlybeauty | Amnesia: The Dark Descent AU

All three of these guys have a private HMD on their journals. I just came off of a little slowatus since school has been crazy, so I apologize for recent slowness from me.

Re: Amry

[formersurgeon]

I will continue to sing the praises of Cecil :) I adore how you write him. You give him that same bizarre view of reality that he has on the show and make it fit with the bizarre reality of Panem, and it's wonderful. I think his character development makes sense, considering the radical swing in perspective from being forced to participate in the games himself.

Reiko

[silberfuchs]

Albert Heinrich | silberfuchs | Journal HMD
Edna Mode | gofightwin

Anything and everything accepted. I know my Edna tags are a bit slower than Albert's and I've also had a couple instances where Albert is canon familiar with certain characters without saying anything icly, which it has been brought to my attention is borderline canon-puncturing. If I've done this to you and it makes you uncomfortable, please let me know.

Otherwise, just looking for all sorts of feedback.

Airdra

[bravelyplucked]

Kousuke Nitou | infinitemayonnaise
Torin (AU) | bravelyplucked

Both of them have private HMDs on their journals, if you'd prefer.

Theresa

[samson]

Brock Samson (samson) | The Venture Bros.

hi i'm new what up. i've been playing brock for a billion years so let me know if anything about him sounds off! starting fresh from canon is always an adventure. also let me know if you have any general questions about his characterization, since i know he's pretty obscure and it's like who does this guy think he is, what's his deal. let me tell you his deal.

if you would prefer to speak privately, i have an HMD here with comments screened and IP logging off.

Dee| Wyatt & Wesker

[president_evil]

Well, I know I sound like a broken record, but I really do tend to worry about the same things. Do my characters sound like believable people? Do they act and respond like you'd expect a real-ish even person too? (Realish, since these are pretty unreal circumstances a lot of the time.)

Does Wesker feel appropriately creepy and evil to you?

Also, I forever apologize for my typos. Especially leaving words out of sentences. I fix any of them that I catch, but some always slip through.

[silberfuchs]

Everything is awesome especially you.

I love all three of your boys but Cyrus in particular has been very on point and a perfect illustration of a remorseless political shaker in the Capitol. I want to punch him right in he face and that's a good thing.

Sam is really fun to play with as well, very easily recognisable as the chartacter from the books and has the frankness that's characteristic of Sam.

I miss Cecil and can't wait for more CR with him in 13 or over the broadcasts.

The only complaint I really have is speed with Cyrus but believe me I know how hard it is to crank out those skeevy doublespeak tags, and around law school work to boot. You're a superhero.

[president_evil]

Things are really just getting started between Tom and Wesker, so I can't really comment on him yet, but I'm really liking Marco so far.

I love the little harkens to Eva you sprinkle in. Even though she was an AU and he's canon, they are connected in their way, and it's really cool that you haven't forgotten that.

Also, all your descriptions forever. They are at once beautiful and, often, horrible. Someday I hope to be as clever with them.

Ni

[polyturtle]

Donatello | polyturtle
Homura | iflipmyhair

I at last have an HMD! Comments screened, IP off, anon allowed.

[silberfuchs]

I feel that Joan is lacking a bit in voice as of the last time we tagged. She comes across as somewhat flat. Perhaps a canon review would help?

[president_evil]

I haven't interacted with either of your pups myself - to my eternal regret, I wanted some Wyatt and Clem so hard - but I have read plenty of Clem's threads and she feels really on point to me.

I especially appreciate that fine line you've got between her be here and be from be from the world that she is, while still being a child and having that curiosity and confusion. She sounds really appropriate.