Thank you very much! I really appreciate hearing all of that - I do sometimes struggle with Thane and body movements, especially in prose, because by nature he is a fairly still person and has a tendency to remain static, which gets boring to write for me so I neglect it. I will try to keep this more in mind and see if I can't find ways to make it clear what he's doing physically so people aren't wondering! And thank you for bringing it up. :)